I think that my writing I am really happy that it is nearly done!!!!!!!!!
Here it is so far...
The map was clear this is where he would find it. He just hadn’t expected that he’d have to get wet. Reluctantly, he swam out to the giant concrete circle. He looked down but couldn’t see the bottom. He sighed , took a deep breath, and dove in…
He was shocked by how deep the dull water was, but where does it lead to? Each minute he wanted to explore more but didn’t want to die. Slowly he swam deeper and deeper, soon he spotted some air bubbles in the water so he thought someone filled it up.
He was getting closer to the bottom and saw something he was nearly out of breath but he was still swimming. He finally reached the bottom, there was a very dark secret passageway. He was so wet. He frantically walked down the passageway.
At the end of the passageway there were some shiny antinet gold and diamonds down there. He got closer to the gold and diamonds and saw a note and a silver pen, this is what the note said:
You are the lucky one who found the diamonds and gold this was here since 1912 please write your name and go before the secret passageway locks
And suddenly he heard something!!! There was a sign on in the rock saying you are locked in.
The word I have highlighted...